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   Author here yes anything in ( ) is a side note from me. Ok so let’s begin.


    Naruto had brought Sasuke back from Orochimaru and soon after he confessed his feelings for Sasuke; Sasuke then explained to Naruto that he felt the same way (those feelings, DUH, it’s love). But Sasukes fan club refused to accept that he was gay, so they still chased after him.

   Sasuke and Naruto are taking a stroll through the less crowded part of Kohana. They have been dating for about 3 months’ now and, unfortunately, the idiotic fan girls still refuse to believe that Sasuke is gay.

   “We should have ramen tonight.” Naruto said, holding Sasuke’s hand.    

    “No way!” Sasuke snapped, “You eat way too much of that crap. Tonight we’re going to have a healthy, non-ramen oriented dinner.”

     “Wha…but why?” Naruto moaned.

     “I just said that, idiot!” Sasuke yelled.

     “Well” Naruto started to say, but was interrupted by the loud roar of fan girls.

     “SASUKE!” they screamed, causing Sasuke and Naruto to release each others hands to cover their, practically, bleeding ears.

     “Oh crap! Here they come.” Sasuke stated.

     Naruto quickly grabbed Sasukes arm and shouted “Run!”

      The fan girls ran towards them maliciously, hitting or pushing everyone out of the way. Good thing they were in the quieter part of town or there would’ve been a high death rate the way these girls were charging.
     
      “God, don’t you people ever give up?” Sasuke yelled towards them. The sound of Sasuke’s voice only made them run faster.

      “Are you trying to out run them or just egg ‘em (them, if you don’t get ‘em) on?” Naruto yelled at Sasuke. ‘Their!” Naruto thought then he shoved Sasuke into a small alley jumping in right behind him.

      The stampede of fan girls ran right passed them (either they can’t stop or they’re hysterical and think Sasuke is in front of them).

      “Man!” Sasuke said in relief, “That was a close one.” As he tried to move he realized that Naruto and himself were stuck in the alley. Sasuke’s hands were sandwiched between his chest and the wall. He tried to push his hands against the wall so that he could push himself out of the alley.

   “OW!” Naruto screeched, “What are you doing, trying to squash me?”

  “No!” Sasuke replied in the same tone as Naruto, “I’m stuck and my hands are sandwiched between the wall and me. So I tried to push against the wall to get free.” Sasuke lowered his voice and muttered in disappointment, “But that didn’t work.”

   “Oh, well…don’t try that again. My back is already practically glued to this wall, I can’t get loose either.” Naruto stated.

    “Well are your hands free?” Sasuke asked.

     “Hmm, uh...ya. Why?”

     “Use a jutsu of some kind and get us out of here.” Sasuke demanded.

      “Hmm.” Naruto pondered.

      “What are you waiting for? Get us” But Sasuke was cut off as he felt something press upon his shoulder.

       “I don’t know?” Naruto hissed into Sasukes ear, “I kinda like these positions.” Naruto had a perverted grin on his face.

        “Oh No, Naruto!” Sasuke said in a rather stern voice. He turned his head in the opposite direction of Naruto’s head that was resting on Sasuke’s shoulder; trying to hide the blush on his face. “Not her-”

       He was cut off again, but this time it was because he felt a sucking sensation tingling his neck. He tried to shrug it off and continue his lecture but he just couldn’t (Sasuke’s getting horny). “Nar…” Sasuke tried, “Naru..”

      “Do you want me to stop?” Naruto whispered in a sexy tone, Naruto lifted his head from Sasukes neck and whispered his question into Sasukes ear.

     Sasuke’s whole body was tingling now, and not being able to move just didn’t help his situation. “Uh…I...” Sasuke stuttered out with his face now beaming red.

     ‘That means he liked it’ Naruto thought to himself. Naruto then continued on leaving hickie marks all over Sasukes neck (no objection from Sasuke). He then began to move his hands, feeling Sasukes perfect muscle toned body.

     ‘I have to stop this’ Sasuke thought as he tried to hold some dignity not wanting to be the Uke, ‘I have to…’ But his thoughts were trailed off as Naruto’s hands reached down (OK you can just guess were his hands went).

     Sasuke and Naruto stayed in the alley until they finally ran out of energy and were in need of some food. “Alright guess we should get out of here.” Naruto stated.
  
    “Huh?” Sasuke added, “Oh. Yeah.”

    Naruto concentrated his chakra and turned into a girl and let Sasuke slide out of the alley first. Then Naruto transformed back into his normal self and he and his lover grabbed hands and began to walk down the still quiet street of Kohana.

    “We should go out for ramen.” Naruto suggested.

    “I already said that we aren’t eating that!” Sasuke reminded his blond lover in an irritated voice.

     ‘He’s just mad because he was the Uke.’ Naruto thought to himself and let out a slight giggle.

     “What?” Sasuke asked curiously.

     “Nothing.” Naruto said playfully.


The End.
YAY! a narusasu fanfic. (i like both sasunaru and narusasu). as long as their together. :D

Well i am giving myself props for getting out of my writers block :bow: YAY! me! :boogie:

also if you don't like to read about guy scenes might not wanna read this (hickies, big whoop).

Anywho i don't own any of these characters. (still wishing on the star though....Disney lied.) (no i love you disney)

Wow got off topic, my bad. ^^; WELP ENJOY! :boogie: :boogie:
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AnonimadeLima Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it
:D :D
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bagelthebeagle Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014
haha nice
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shaydasmith Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
that was funny(that's how i think its cute) that was really good!!!!!:beach: :lovehug: You better don't steal 
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Luffy0001 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*the proper use of the three (their, there, and they're) is bothering me but I like the story.
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reynakitsune95 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
<font><font>Que linda imagen me encanta </font></font>
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YaoiTotoro Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
heh heh, nice.
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NightwingRobin01 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Student Artist
I ship this hard! XD it's awesome! Well done!
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RyionSteveon Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nice one, loved it
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:iconlozfanchick:
LoZfanchick Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
Thank you!
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nivrez1 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
i got hard.. haha
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Peachgoodnessfan Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Awesome job!
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:iconlozfanchick:
LoZfanchick Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
thanks :)
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NarusasuCrazy Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That was a good fanfic lol Naruto is a perv!
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:iconlozfanchick:
LoZfanchick Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012
thanks :)
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TenTailes Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree with Ramen-eatingvamp13
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Ramen-eatingvamp13 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
naruto=new yaoi pervy sage
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:iconeuliiek:
Euliiek Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
I loveed it!!!! It was sooo cute you did a great job!
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Unicorngirlnat101 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Narusasu all the way ( sasuke is uke )
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DeidaraIsAGirl Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
narusasu pones sasunaru
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noctis1997 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012
Oh my God this was an awesome fanfic!!!!! I love it sooo much this is going into my favorites! :D
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:icondissapearedshadow233:
love it!
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YukICroSs-xP Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Student Writer
lawl ^.^
I LOVE IT !
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japanese123 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011
ah. now i know who the uke was in my avatar.[p.s. the yellow blob says: "just gotten back from very rough sex"]no offense. my friend dared me to. i lost the bet.
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*nose bleed*
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delenaanderson Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
haha loved it expecialy the "uke" part lol
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omgzhai Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
that was so kawaii
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SasukeLuv5545 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011
this is the first thing added to my favorites :)
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:iconlozfanchick:
LoZfanchick Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011
YAY! :D
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SasukeLuv5545 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011
hehe I love it when Sasuke is the uke ^^
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:iconlozfanchick:
LoZfanchick Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011
agreed
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wolfcubb Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
ROFLMFAO!!!! 'He's just mad because he was the Uke' Im laughing my ass off XDXD
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blooberchik1 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
omg! i love this! it's not super smutty, but its not boring! <3 FOREVER!!! btw this is now favorited!
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:iconlozfanchick:
LoZfanchick Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011
YAY! Thank you!!
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Tigeress55 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol!
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XxholyoreosxX Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2011  Student Artisan Crafter
luve it and sasuke was UKE HAHAHAHAHAHA xP
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:iconlozfanchick:
LoZfanchick Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011
lol :D yup
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XxholyoreosxX Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Student Artisan Crafter
xP
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:icondarkshadowlazyclouds:
nice nice,u should make more lol
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:iconlozfanchick:
LoZfanchick Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011
thank you :)
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:icondarkshadowlazyclouds:
your wellcom :)
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Leahofficialwolf Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2011  Student Writer
LOL <3 <3
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:iconlozfanchick:
LoZfanchick Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011
:D
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MsStubborn83 Featured By Owner May 18, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Mah, Disney ALWAYS lies~
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insaneEMOchick Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Student Artist
omg in one of my storys i have some one call sasuke sasUKE
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:iconlozfanchick:
LoZfanchick Featured By Owner May 31, 2011
but i love em ::)
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:iconmsstubborn83:
MsStubborn83 Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Yes, I luv them too.
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InscriptedinurHeart Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011
Haha this is a really adorable story. I hope you can make more ^-^
~with all love Rin
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I smiled at my love.
"What is it" he/she asks.
"oh nothing." I said
I smiled again since its -everything- becuz i love you.
"Haha ur weird." :D
- ^-^
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LoZfanchick Featured By Owner May 31, 2011
thanks
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kewlchicka Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2011  Student Writer
Aweh~!Theres no more~! It;s so amazing there should be more
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LoZfanchick Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2011
lol thank you but nope it's a one-shot :)
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